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Current progress details:


- dialogs: 50%
- backgrounds: 50%
- poses: 10%
- composite: 00%

Estimated time of the next update:


In a week, maybe two.


Also have a progress bar up now as you can see, which informs you how much progress I made, as well as how much the production is stalling because I have more important things to do at the moment.
(counter updated frequently, depending on how fast I can progress with the page. So the number can actually be increased too, if something comes up meanwhile. If you don't see it change from one day to the next, that means I didn't have time to progress with the comic on that day.)


Heartstrings is also on tumblr!

You can also read the first two chapters in one flash file just by clicking through (similar to the tumblr solution, but more comfortable) here
in courtesy of :iconponyminus:


I'm no artist, no writer and neither is my native language English. So don't be surprised if the visuals are bad (all I do is trying to copy the show's style), the writing is bad and full of grammar mistakes. So I'm just a random person on the internet who wants to tell a tale, in my clumsy way.


My policy on favoriting stuff: If you favorite my stuff, I'll thank it by making more of it. This goes both ways, if I favorite your stuff, it means I like it, so please make more of it. ;)

Also, please note that my way to thank praises is trying to get the next page out sooner, so don't get offended by me not replying with a standard, copy-paste "thank you" to your kind comment, rest assured I read everything and I really appreciate them!

May the next year be full of success and happiness for you all! :)
And possibly have more frequent comic updates. No promises on that one, but I'll try.

On another note, I've been meaning to make a journal entry about the translations of my comic for a while now. I've collected the translators and translation locations to a separate panel on my main page (you may have to scroll down a bit), currently we have Korean, French, Occitan, Spanish and Russian translations, some have more versions as more people/teams have started translating it (which means more variety for the readers, you can choose for yourself which version you want to read). If you are one of the translators but don't see yourself on the list, send me note (with the location of your translation) so I can add you too.

Cheers! :party:

Translations

This panel will show all the translations of the comic with links to the translators and their translation. I'll try to roam through my messages to find out who did what language, if you did but don't see yourself on this list please drop me a message about it. :)
Also there are multiple translators/translations for some languages, so you can't say there's no variety in that. :3 (I usually don't deny the "right" for anyone to translate my stuff to their native language.)

Korean - :iconidontknowwell: - (first page) (page list)
French - :iconsimocarina: - (link)
Occitan - :iconsimocarina: - (link)
Spanish - :icondavid-irastra: - (link) - :iconraimundo1941: - (link)
Russian - :icontranvi: & :iconfeng-shui1301: - (link)
German - :iconsenatorlya1: - (link)

Testing

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What's Pinchy's special talent? 

34%
254 deviants said ...Why do I have the feeling that you haven't even thought it up yet?
22%
164 deviants said Common sense
19%
140 deviants said Reading faces
9%
69 deviants said Sharing the same manestyle with half of the background fillies
9%
68 deviants said Reading minds
7%
49 deviants said Access to free dental care

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:iconsuperdude2075:
superdude2075 Featured By Owner 11 hours ago  Student General Artist
hold old are your characters, like lyra, bon bon, tootie, dj, and derpy and dinky?
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner 9 hours ago
Lyra, BonBon and Vinyl are young adults, Derpy is a bit younger than them (1-2 years or so, but still count as young adult). Tootsie and Dinky are the age of the CMC.
Berry and Colgate are a bit older, considering the age of Berry's daughter.
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:iconsuperdude2075:
superdude2075 Featured By Owner 9 hours ago  Student General Artist
thanks.
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:iconnbking992:
Nbking992 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member
Who is pinchy?
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner 1 day ago
The daughter of Berry Punch.
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:iconnbking992:
Nbking992 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member
Why i know that name but i dont remember how she are?
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner 22 hours ago
She's introduced in chapter 3, page 8.
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:iconktd1993:
kTd1993 Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Loved that start for Chapter 6. When's the next page coming out? And why does the progress at this moment say 0%.
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Dunno, in 1 or 2 weeks. The progress bar shows 0% because I barely even started it yet. :3
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:iconktd1993:
kTd1993 Featured By Owner 3 days ago
I see. Well take your time.
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:iconzanarnaryon:
ZanarNaryon Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
You do a serious great job at fixing small plotholes in the show, like that Derpy don't always have, well, derpy eyes
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner 4 days ago
And thanks to the agents, I can explain most (if not all) of the stranger pony appearances too. :3
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:iconzanarnaryon:
ZanarNaryon Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
And the good old animation error that makes it look like its more than one Lyra in one shot?
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Agents. :3
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:iconregreme:
Regreme Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Slowly going through your Lyra/BonBon comic. The more I read, the more I like it. Though, not a full supporter of some of the pairings(for instance, I prefer Octavia and Vinyl as just friends). Still well drawn and written though.

Oh, and thought I'd point out something. Though you have Bon Bon fall for Lyra here, in the comics, it's been shown to have Bon Bon getting blushing googley eyes at Big Mac. Meaning, she's not les. She's bi, liking both males and females. That could pose problems, eh? Admittedly, less so if Lyra is as well, but no way for either of them to know either way, eh?
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner Edited 5 days ago
I don't consider that comic to be canon for this comic, only the show.
Though even if I did, I can just write it down as that particular BonBon is a disguised agent. A male agent too, to make things more spicy. :3
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:iconregreme:
Regreme Featured By Owner 4 days ago
lol ^_^ Too bad. Figured it'd make things interesting. After all, it's a common thing with relationships. With healthy relationships having their love be stronger than feelings of lust, though there are at times tests of this value of integrity.
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:iconktd1993:
kTd1993 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
U almost finished with the Chapter 6 Heartstrings comic?
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Actually, yeah. I'm polishing the text still, but it should be up in an hour or two.
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:iconktd1993:
kTd1993 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Well all right. This is getting to exciting.
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