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Heartstrings ch1/p1 - Mare meets mareby *TriteBristle

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And so it starts.

This is the very first time I draw ponies, let alone digitally, using only a mouse... Also, I'm not an artist, so don't expect visual wonders.

I'm here to tell a tale (on my own clumsy way), a tale about two hearts finding each other, a tale about love, friendship, secret pony organizations, inter-dimensional traveling, saving the world over and over again. So mostly the usual stuff. Lyra and Bonbon were always in the background, while the camera was mainly focusing on the mane 6, but the background ponies also took their part in saving the day. How? Stay tuned, and you'll see.

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Also, note: This comic was/is made primarily for mature audience, even though there are no NSFW scenes in it, non-graphic violence and possibly frightening scenes can (and do) occur (even though very, very rarely). That being said, the general atmosphere of the comic is supposed to be a cheerful love-comedy, with drama elements. Hope you'll still enjoy it!

MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and

, please don't sue me.

love 3 3

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~~mad 0 0~~

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~Sadiearwen24 May 13, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Iiiiiiiideeeeeeaaaaaaa!! Would it be okay if I did a YouTube dubbed version of this comic? All credits go to you, of course. :3

*TriteBristle May 14, 2013

Sure, if you want to.

There's a radioplay in production by someone else already too.

~Sadiearwen24 May 14, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Okie dokie lokie :3 Thanks. This is a great comic by the way. Very entertaining :3

~NeoRae May 3, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Love it <3 great B3

~Fanart-RainbowDashie May 3, 2013 New member

Lyra.. *sigh*

~CrackleTheDragon Apr 18, 2013

If you ever post a revised version of this comic, might you consider changing some of the wording? I would recommend changing "I promised it to my father" to "I promised my father;" the difference being in the omission of the word "it;" without "it", the wording of the statement is much less awkward. I suspect the main character promised their father that they would find a way to reach Equestria, but even if, hypothetically speaking, the main character promised to retrieve some object, omitting the word "it" would still flow better and make sense. example "I promised my father I would find Bob's magical sword." (Nothing to do with MLP, just talking about literature in general). Although "it" in the sentence "I promised it to my father" is much more awkward than the sentence "now I have nothing to go back for," I would still suggest that you also change "now I have nothing to go back for." If you add" left after the instance of "nothing" and deleted "now," it would result in "I have nothing left to go back for," which sounds better (to me). Even so, it is still slightly awkwardly worded. I cannot decided whether "go back to" or "go back for," sounds better. Its rather jarring to repeat "to" in such close proximity to the "to" in "to go back," but "to go back for," conjures up forgetting something and returning to retrieve it rather than throwing so much of one's efforts into finding Equestria, that nothing remains for main character in their original world Maybe instead of "I have" you could write "there is," and add "for me": "There is nothing left for me to go back to." Hmmm.... I don't like that either. As I'm writing this, I am just thinking out-loud. Maybe since the early comic is from the character's point of view, the white panels indicating introspection and that the character is in transit and the end panels are the eyes opening indicating arrival, one need not say "go back to," but could actually speak in the present as the beginning of the comic. For example, "There is nothing left for here." Some of the character last thought before they journey to Equestria. I think my favorite idea for improving the lien of text "now I have nothing to go back for" is to replace it with "There is nothing left for here." However, I am still really uncertain. I definitely recommend deleting the "it" in "I promised it to my father" though. If this comic is based on a fan-fic and "I promised it to my father" is the original wording, there's no reason you can't improve upon the original on small things like that without changing the whole story.

~templar127 Apr 18, 2013

must read!

~InkySnowFox Apr 16, 2013 Student Digital Artist

This is your first time.... you're doing it digitally... using only a mouse.... and you don't consider yourself an artist. But you have duplicated the show nearly entirely in style and a cute carefree attitude. I have been drawing ponies for a few months now and I could never hope to be able to do as awesome a comic as this. GOOD JOB.

~Dakathi666 Apr 16, 2013

Hmmm.

~Winget2 Apr 15, 2013

Amazing job

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