(Sorry for posting this comment again. I just realized I forget to add a paragraph break between two paragraphs. Feel free to delete the prior comment that is missing the paragraph break.)
If I may, I wish to point something out. It seems that Bon Bon has fallen in love with Lyra. In addition, Bon Bon seems very attracted towards Lyra. At the same time, Octavia seems to have a fondness for Lyra. Octavia also has an admiration for Lyra’s talent and a curiosity about Lyra. At least that is how I am interpreting the story your presenting so far. Therefore, what is it that I want to point out you may ask. Well, this fondness and admiration Octavia seems to have for Lyra could evolve into love. At least that is how I interpret the story you presented so far.
Therefore, you may be asking yourself why I am pointing this out. Well, if you chose to process in the direction I am about to suggest. You could create a very intriguing, engaging, and dynamic love triangle between Lyra, Bon Bon, and Octavia. I believe you have the talent to introduce a plot point of a love triangle into the comic and create a very effective story. That is just my opinion. In addition, this is only a suggestion. Therefore, you do not have to acknowledge it or even follow through with my suggestion.
Me personally, I would like to see shipping between Lyra, Bon Bon, and Octavia. I am making the suggestion here because I believe you have the talent to create an effective storyline featuring such shipping.
However, if I may be so brazen to suggest such a thing. I also wish to suggest something else. From what I can interpret from the comic so far. There exist a love between Bon Bon and Lyra. Much of that love radiates from Bon Bon. If you wanted to, you could create that same love between Octavia and Lyra. I believe you have to ability to create an Octavia and Lyra shipping in this comic. I also believe you have the talent to create an effective Octavia and Lyra shipping. If you so choose to. Nevertheless, as I already mentioned it is only a suggestion.
Me personally, I would like to see that happen. Then again, I would also like to see a Lyra, Bon Bon, and Octavia shipping.
Lastly, since I have come this far, I will make one last bold suggestion. So far, the love between Lyra and Bon Bon presented in this comic has stayed within a comfort zone. What I mean by that is we have seen the love they have for one another manifest itself in the form of dialog they have shared with one another that suggest they have a love for one another. They have also shared embraces with one another during emotional moments. They have also shared deep personal dialog with one another sleeping in the same bed. Love can go beyond that and can take on an adult theme. An adult theme of love would be a sexual relationship. If you felt you could take on the challenge. I believe you could create sexual shipping between Lyra and Bon Bon. With the same effort, you have devoted towards creating this bond between Lyra and Bon Bon. You could also devote that same effort towards creating a bond between Lyra and Octavia. Alternatively, you could devote that same effort towards creating a bond between Lyra, Bon Bon, and Ocatvia. Furthermore, either of these bonds could feature a sexual relationship.
However, creating a sexual relationship does not mean the comic has to take a vulgar turn. I believe you have the talent to introduce a plot point such as sexual relationships into this comic without jeopardizing the story or integrity of the comic. You could introduce such a mature theme and make the story into one that is still pure, heartwarming, and touching to readers.
Nevertheless, in the end, these are only suggestions. Moreover, as you can imagine I would like them to see them could to been. If nothing else, you could create alternative comic pages that featured these suggestions. By that is not for me to decide. If anything, I just wanted to bring these suggestions out into the open and perhaps start a discussion of such suggestions. I would like to see a discussion of such suggestions that features comments of intelligent and understanding rather than one of stupidity and ignorance. So anyway, I will leave all that I have said in your capable hands.
On a final note, thank you for creating this comic. It is not often that a comic captures my attention with its story and characters. Your comic has me very much captivated by it story and characters. So thank you for making these comics. They are always a joy to read.
Thank you very much for your reply. I am honored that you would take the time of day to reply to my long-winded comment. Furthermore, I appreciate your constructive reply. I am happy that you answered with sincerity and politeness. In addition, I am glad you did not take offense to make comment. I appreciate your straight forwardness and honesty.
I am very much curious now on where you will take the comic. Your reply has me eager to read your future comics. Your subtle hint on future plot has me very much invested in how you will develop the story and characters. I look forward to your future comics.
Also, do not worry about how long you take in making the comics. I believe with absolute certainly that you should strive for quality over quantity. Furthermore, the time and effort you invest in making these comics is what makes it so fascinating. So please feel free to take all the time you feel necessary to retain the magnificent quality these comics possess.
Thank you once more for your reply. Best of luck to you as you progress with the comic.