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:iconlyraponyplz::iconsays3plz:Is this still about her eating foals? I thought we were over that thing...

Drama on the horizon!

And once again, the mighty light switch is victorious over the darkness.

Next on Heartstrings:
:iconbonbonplz::iconsays3plz:This is the part where they usually start to scream.
As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by :iconfyre-flye:, please don't sue me.
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:iconscorpomix97:
Scorpomix97 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
BON BON LET THE BUGBEAR OUT.
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:iconnightfire-613:
Nightfire-613 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I still say it's kinda like a cult...
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:iconcookiemoone:
CookieMoone Featured By Owner May 13, 2015  New Deviant
I KNOWED! BonBon was terrorist !!
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:iconjoltster109:
joltster109 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Student
Whoa. Those ponies were a mix of Men in Black and NINJAS. O.O
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:iconsasq:
SasQ Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
It's simple: Lyra is a paranoid schizophrenic ;) She sees thing which aren't there, especially when nowhere is around.
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:iconcoolstriker64:
Coolstriker64 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
What? how did that work? But... did they not have somepony looking over the door? They did just say Bonbon should be roting in jail right now, you'de think  they'd keep an eye on her. Also they must know the Lyra had a room mate on any acount. So... why were they not at the door?
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
There were way more agents involved in this event than this two. :3
And one of them can teleport ponies without any sound or visual effect. Takes more energy and effort than normal teleportation, but excellent for emergency extractions like this.
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:iconenderthedark:
EndertheDark Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Why do I get the feeling that one of those two agents is . . . Octavia?
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Because you try to place known characters there, despite me emphasizing that they are brand-new ones. xD
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:iconenderthedark:
EndertheDark Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
I still think it's Octavia.
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Despite Tavi having a whole different shade of purple eyes. xD
She has enough problems running the guild, being an officer for a secret agency would be way too much of an extra burden for her.
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:iconenderthedark:
EndertheDark Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Whatever, bro . . . 
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:iconshadoweevee123t:
shadoweevee123t Featured By Owner Edited Jan 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
good job
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:iconartisticninjacat:
ArtisticNinjaCat Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Uh Oh! Something's up!
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:iconkacript:
kacript Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
Well, this is sure to make Lyra a bit uncomfortable and cautious around Bon Bon.
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
So, it sounds like you were just given permission to ask Bonny why the RIAA doesn't like her. She may not like being asked about her illegal music downloading habits, but she's not stranger to curiosity. I doubt she'll begrudge you the question.
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:iconcatisawesome123:
catisawesome123 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
these mysterious ponies really resemble men in black :P
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:iconlagustiegal:
LaGustieGal Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This reminds me of the flutter tree incident on the train to appleoosa in over a barrel
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:iconphaedrolous:
Phaedrolous Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student General Artist
They Shadow Meld and can disappear with them?  DAT'S SO AWESOME!!
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:iconcosmichunter89:
CosmicHunter89 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Student General Artist
...

... But they were RIGHT THERE, before the lights turned on...

... WHAT SORCERY IS THIS?!
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:icondarkhypernova:
DarkHypernova Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
The plot thickens....
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:iconnanorider426:
Nanorider426 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Eeyup!
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:icontimmcjimfrompl:
TimMcJimFromPl Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
Wow! Nice.
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:iconalexis308:
Alexis308 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
Maybe she stool from Celestia's Labratories?
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:iconditzydoo0:
DitzyDoo0 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is addictive it has been three hours since I started, Good job! Thumbs Up 
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Goldbird13 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
Hahahah Description Lyra "Is this still about her eating foals? I thought we were over that thing..." 
XD
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:iconschrabbel:
Schrabbel Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH something is about to happen and I can'T wait. Give me a Doctor.
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:icontisonvanlane:
TisonVanlane Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
so Heartstrings do you know when you will post the next scene for this chapter? I am very curious on what lyra does.
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Hopefully in a day or two. :)
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:icontisonvanlane:
TisonVanlane Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
thanks
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:iconsnowflakethepony337:
SnowflakeThePony337 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
ASK HER!!!! We must know her secret (well, not "must know", how about "hopefully will know" her secret)!
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:iconkmathel94:
kmathel94 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist
Lol Lyras reaction was priceless!
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:iconkittygirl12345678:
Kittygirl12345678 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
D: NOOOO! I NEED MORE PAGES! Oh well, at least I'm good at dealing with cliff-hangers.
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:iconnot-quite-lilac:
Not-Quite-Lilac Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Aw drat. I didn't think I'd reach the update barrier quite so quickly.

Nice comic, good work with the art.
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:iconshockwave1111:
Shockwave1111 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
DUM DUM DUMMMM
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:iconallanpike:
Allanpike Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Huh... wonder what she did...
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:iconnyerguds:
Nyerguds Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Mysteeeeeeerious! *wiggles fingers for extra mysteriousness... and to make Lyra jealous*
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:iconnati11184:
nati11184 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconplottingtwilightplz:
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
D'aw scared face Lyra is adorbs :3
Oh right! Drama and all that fun stuff. I am most intrigued. 
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greencarrot01 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, this is awesome!
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:iconkittyartpony:
KittyArtPony Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconplottwistplz:
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:iconwerewolf-hero:
Werewolf-Hero Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i'm creeped out now
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:iconthesnatcher1:
TheSnatcher1 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome work! Couldn´t stop reading - this is getting veeeeery interesting :)
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:iconsailorshowgirl:
SailorShowgirl Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
What Lyra Should Do: Tell Bonbon the truth and listen to Bonbon's story and then take all factors into consideration before making up her mind (including Bonbon's incredible kindness toward Lyra thus far). Not every criminal remains unrepentant or unreformed.

Also, I'm wondering what safeguards Celestia has put into place that prevents the RIA from running amok. Especially since Celestia herself (or any other pony for that matter) can't rein the RIA in.
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Yep, knowing Lyra she'll just take the issue head-on.

I'm thinking on making an extra page about it, to show what kind of creatures Celestia put in charge. Of course, I'll have to expand the mythology further, though since the show's lore is already full of all kinds of mythical creatures, some more won't hurt much. :)
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:iconsailorshowgirl:
SailorShowgirl Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Hopefully head on means she'll patiently wait for Bonbon to give an explanation if she wants and went she wants. This will be just as hard for Bonbon as it will be for Lyra (maybe even harder considering Bonbon has now fallen pretty hard for Lyra). Still, the most important element in ANY RELATIONSHIP is TRUST and they both need to TRUST EACH OTHER if this will work out.

As for what kinds of creatures are in charge of the RIA, I imagine they'll need to be creatures immune to mind control and at least partially immune to unicorn magic of all sorts. I'm just hoping there are checks and balances to this organization's powers (as anything less could [and probably would] lead to an neigh UNBELIEVABLE abuse of power).

Hope we see more Dolphin Dream soon. She's (or he's [can't remember which] is my favorite. ^_^
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:icontritebristle:
TriteBristle Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Don't worry, I'm not a big fan of nerve-wrecking dramas that span further than a couple of pages. xD

As for DD, let's just say that she'll get her own romance side-story within a few chapters. :3
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:iconsailorshowgirl:
SailorShowgirl Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
OTP! :D
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:iconojamapony:
Ojamapony Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
NOH
NOT TROUBLE IN PARADISE NO
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